Talk:Hlk'yah G̱awG̱a

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I think you have done a good job selecting interesting and relevant information, and it is well organized. My only note to add is that there is a page for Guujaaw, so you could add the hyperlink for that. Hannahrdwyer (talk) 15:54, 18 September 2017 (UTC)Hannahrdwyer

Windy Bay Peer review

Hly’yah Gwaga/Intro

• You could add a infobox: historic site which will create a section on the righthand side since it’s a historic location
• On the wikicommons site, there are some photos of Windy Bay that might be nice to include

History

• This seems like a fairly short paragraph - do you think it could be expanded to talk about any house sites, clans, or any other other cultural significance to this spot? This information could come from oral histories (Swanton?), archaeologists, or historians.
• The sentence “Today, many trees at Hlk'yah Gawga show signs of this use” is confusing. I know you’re talking about medicines and culturally modified trees, but maybe reformat it to make this clearer
• "During the logging protests of the 1980's, Hlk'yah Gawga was a gathering place for protesters”: don’t assume that the readers know that there have been logging protests at this point in your article, though I know you get to it later.

Logging Protests

• More things in this can be hyperlinked to other wiki articles (ITT-Rayonier, CHN, RCMP, David Suzuki, Nature of Things)
• Expand ‘RCMP’ to actually say the Royal Canadian Mounted Police
• What were the results of the arrests?
• Minor edit: Guujaaw isn’t the current President of the Nation
• More hyperlinking for the legal agreements that resulted out of the protests

Legacy Pole

• “the need for vigilance against impending attacks” (pg. 30) - double check and make sure you site this properly since its a direct quote
• Why are the names of the figures capitalized in the last paragraph? You don’t necessarily need to change this, its just not clear why
• Including a photo of the pole, if you took one of your own in the class would be great! (NKPhillips (talk) 04:50, 18 September 2017 (UTC))

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Emmeline's edits

Guujaaw is past-President of the CHN, current hereditary chief.

Full title for Gwaii Haanas is: Gwaii Haanas National Park Reserve, National Marine Conservation Area Reserve, and Haida Heritage Site - you could also link to the Gwaii Haanas wiki page

In the second to last paragraph do you want the ‘(pg. 30)’ included in the footnote instead?

Your information provided in your wiki page is valuable. However, I’m left with questions about the village site geography, the population of the village and number of houses, the Chiefs, etc.

Are there any European references to and/or contact with Hlk’yah Gawga to include?

Are there any important contributions that exist in Haida culture today stemming from Hlk’yah Gawga?

How were the Hlk’yah Gawga impacted by the smallpox emergency?

Emmymars (talk) 05:56, 18 September 2017 (UTC)

Kate's Edits

As a result of pressure stemming from the media's coverage of the logging protests on Athlii Gwaii, Canada and the Province of British Columbia’s governments entered into negotiations with the Council of the Haida Nation in 1987.[2] In 1988, the South Moresby Agreement was signed, designating Gwaii Haanas as a National Park Reserve.[8] In 1993, the Gwaii Haanas Agreement was signed by the Council of the Haida Nation and the Government of Canada. The two governments agreed to co-manage the land of the Gwaii Haanas National Park Reserve and Haida Heritage Site, and committed to creating a marine agreement in the future.[9] In 2009, the Kunst’aa Guu–Kunst’aayah Reconciliation Protocol was formed, which outlined Haida and Crown land titles,[10] and in 2010 the Gwaii Haanas Marine Agreement was ratified to protect the marine ecosystem of southern Haida Gwaii.[8] — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kehodgson (talk • contribs) 18:56, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

I would hyperlink the Royal Canadian Mounted Police. Also, Athlii Gwaii is mis-spelt in the history section. (Kehodgson (talk) 18:51, 21 September 2017 (UTC))

Em's edits

1. Here's the link to the clip art of the Legacy Pole : https://www.pc.gc.ca/en/pn-np/bc/gwaiihaanas/decouvrir-discover/~/media/CE33682DC8744DAA81ADC2CF9846B03B.ashx?w=72&h=350&as=1 & here's the link for the source : https://www.pc.gc.ca/en/pn-np/bc/gwaiihaanas/decouvrir-discover/mat-heraldique-legacy-pole — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emilybird (talk • contribs) 18:52, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

2. Note #5.c p. 30;

3. Note #6.b-c p. 111;

4. Note #2.g. p. 6; — Preceding unsigned comment added by Emilybird (talk • contribs) 19:11, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

Kluane

Citation 2 ("In 1986, a cross-country media campaign began in which the South Moresby Caravan travelled from St. John's Newfoundland to Vancouver, with public stops, concerts, and fundraising events along the way."): page 7 Citation 2 ("In 1986, a cross-country media campaign began in which the South Moresby Caravan travelled from St. John's Newfoundland to Vancouver, with public stops, concerts, and fundraising events along the way.": page 7 Citation 2 ("As a result of pressure stemming from the media's coverage of the logging protests on Athlii Gwaii, Canada and the Province of British Columbia’s governments entered into negotiations with the Council of the Haida Nation in 1987."): page 6

Citation 5 ("The campaign to protect Lyell Island from logging received international media attention."): page 31

Add a second citation after "David Suzuki": "PAGE 31 - Dean, Michael (2009). "What they are doing to the land they are doing to us" : environmental politics on Haida Gwaii (Thesis). University of British Columbia. doi:10.14288/1.0067779."

Citation 7 ("The campaign to protect Lyell Island from logging received international media attention."): page 191

Citation 6 (at Suzuki's line): page 111 Citation 6 (Bill Reid line): page 142 Citation 6 ("The journey garnered national media attention on not only the journey itself but also the blockades on Athlii Gwaii."): page 142-143 Citation 6 ("However, none served any jail time."): page 132

Citation 8 ("In 1988, the South Moresby Agreement was signed, designating Gwaii Haanas as a national park reserve." also for: "and in 2010 the Gwaii Haanas Marine Agreement was ratified to protect the marine ecosystem of southern Haida Gwaii."): paragraph 23

Citation 9 ("As a result, the two governments agreed to co-manage the land of the Gwaii Haanas National Park Reserve and Haida Heritage Site, and committed to creating a marine agreement in the future."): Page 2-3

Citation 10 ("In 2009, the Kunst’aa Guu–Kunst’aayah Reconciliation Protocol was formed, which outlined Haida and Crown land titles,") : online web page, paragraph 1 (+ more? it's talked about throughout) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kluanebr (talk • contribs) 21:25, 21 September 2017 (UTC)

Sourcing

Hi Emrco, NKPhillips,

I wanted to give an easy example of what you can do to make the citations show up properly.

Right now what you're doing is a repeated citation, which while very helpful with websites and cases where you only need to cite one page or section, it's not really helpful when you need to cite specific pages. The reason why it's not helpful is because whenever you change the page number in the citation that's the page number that will show up - it doesn't keep track of past page numbers. In order to show new page numbers all you need to do is create a new citation that gives the new page number. That means that you'll have a citation like this:

<ref>{{Cite book|url=https://www.worldcat.org/oclc/431538674|title=Haida Gwaii : the Queen Charlotte Islands|last=1951-|first=Horwood, Dennis,|date=2006|publisher=Heritage House|others=Parkin, Tom, 1953-|isbn=1894974115|page=141|edition=2nd ed|location=Surrey, B.C.|oclc=431538674}}</ref>

followed by a citation ilke this for a new page number:

<ref>{{Cite book|url=https://www.worldcat.org/oclc/431538674|title=Haida Gwaii : the Queen Charlotte Islands|last=1951-|first=Horwood, Dennis,|date=2006|publisher=Heritage House|others=Parkin, Tom, 1953-|isbn=1894974115|page=100|edition=2nd ed|location=Surrey, B.C.|oclc=431538674}}</ref>

These separate citations will show up on the page as follows:

There's another way to do this, but it's a bit more complicated than this. Both ways are correct but the above method is easier, so it's what I recommend that you do. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:15, 28 September 2017 (UTC)